Evaluation of Rough Cut

The first issue that arose was the length of the rough cut. It was only 1 minute long and in our plan we had hoped to have it around double this. Although we are concerned about this, we still have film which was not added and will be soon.

The shots we have so far however,I feel were effective and well edited. Although we are going to re-do the credits as we felt they needed to be in for longer and at different points, the way we plan on putting them in after this will be much more effective. As you can see, the rough cut at this point looks very unedited with lots of pauses but we plan on using these pauses to include some more opening credits. We also decided to put our own names in the credits.

As you can tell from the rough cut, we have yet to add the foley sound. Obviously, we plan on removing the current noises of the filming process we have on it. The story line at this point is shown as very broad and not quite clear but we plan on changes the places of some of these shots to try and make it a bit more clearer to the spectator what the story line.

I think the weakest point of our opening so far is the long pauses between each shot, which does not allow the opening to flow. We will be modifying the credits and adding in some more to create a more thriller feel.

Overall, i would say that although the rough cut at the moment is too short and needs further work on sound and editing, i feel this is a good basis to grow from.